Is this for a game? I do like the use of the xylophone though.
At around 0:50, the strings need to be louder. For the most part, very amping, could be used as a battle theme. If this is meant to be a more epic piece in accordance with your description, it needs a bit more darker influence to it. Where's that "temptation?" It's poppy and strong, but not exactly dark enough to speak of a fight between brothers.
Uh. Kinda. I am not sure what it is going to be yet but it is going to be for a game or story. What you're saying makes sense. I was just trying to convey the temptation in a different way. And thanks, I play the xylophone and every other percussion instrument so I try to make really nice parts for those instruments.
Pretty good for retro. Nice use of this.
OH OH OH! You guys should make an acoustic version for the end of the game!
Thanks man! We already have an acoustic version of this song, but it's not going to be used as an ending song though. Still, thanks for the input, we appreciate it.
What is that first woodwind instrument that you're using? Is that a bassoon or a clarinet? Can't tell, but I don't exactly like it.
I do like the harmony though, it's very good throughout the entire thing. Nice use of instrumentation. Would work as a loop.
Its a bass clarinet, and thanks for the kind words and critique
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